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room rearranged, notes on fic, Kimmie!
Hey readers! How are you? I'm doing okay I guess. Well, Aunt C decided to move my room around. Now my entertainment center is near my bed, and caddy corner where the tall bureau was. Now that is near my closet. At first I made a HUGE, big, bloody, dramatic deal. I was crying, making it into something it wasn't. Yeah. It was nothing. But yea. But then after a while, I kind of like it. Now my books are on top of the E Center, and my other stuff is in other places. Well, now I'm on chapter 30 ish of HP Book 5...that's like disc 19. I told Mer this morning I wanted to get to disc 17. Hehe. I've been watching some of the KP Marathon from last month. Fun! How do you like Part 3 of Kim Possible: A Hero's First Time? I wrote it AFTER my room was rearranged. But I think I did it well. I hope you guys liked it too. Now for the notes: *Handwritten it was 16 pages long, 5 in Microsoft Works, Times New Roman, font 10 and it was 4055 words. *This is the first fanfic in which I went really graphic when writing a sex scene. *This is my last fanfic of the year. *Cream did not appear until Part 3 in the hw version. *The part where Kim flips off the stairs and Ashley slides down the banister was not in the hw version, I made that up. *Kim is older than Ashley. The series has not revealed her exact bday, so whatever is Kim's birthday, Ashley's will follow a few months after. Like i.e. K.P's bday is Jan, A.P.B.'s March, etc. You get it? *In the original, Kim is not phased at the line, "entire night...ecstasy." *Ashley's favorite ice cream is Peaches and Cream. *There was no mention of Lindsay Lohan in the hw version. *Did you notice the TLK references? Ashley tells Kim to repeat, "Hakuna Matata" and Kim says to Ron, "I pinned ya" after she pounces him. *Rufus is not in the handwritten version at all, I decided to stick him in. *Monique does not sleep over at the Possible-Benlove's house in the hw version. *It took 75 minutes for the first part. *51 for the 2nd part *77 for 3rd part *Totalling to 3 hours 30 minutes. *Notice the drama reference? *In hw version Cream was an undecided gender, but became a male in the typed version. *Cream is based off my cousin's Dog Hank. *What Ashley is trying to get at when talking to Ron about his "concern" is that Kim has no fear. *The last paragraph in part 1 is in the hw vers. but I decided to use it as a teaser. *When Ashley is nervous or worried she brushes her hair obsessively *Kim apparently shaves down there...I wouldn't put it past her. *Did you like the comparsion of EJ of Titanic's deep breath before he died to Kim's deep breath before she lost her virginity? *Apparently Cream is a watch dog. *The lines about blue fox and pink sloth is a reference to the episode called Animal Attraction. *Oviously the second time they had sex, Kim was straddling him. I can imagine that. *KP wears Boy short undies? Most fics have her wearing a thong, i decided against that, after all she had just lost her virginity and that would be kind of hard to fight in. *Did you like how Shego correctly guess Kim was not a virgin anymore? Makes you wonder huh? *Obviously Ashley is one of those kids who feeds their dogs at the table. *Did you like how Cream beat Kim downstairs? *Ashley obviously likes Kim's hair. *Kim likes to leave the girls in the dark. *Why would Ashley keep morning after pill's in a safe? Does her mother know? *Kim's being sarcastic when Ashley asks Cream where he's going. *I can just imagine the ending music as Kim says "So not" when Ashley tries to get it out of Kim to what happened the night before. *My prudeness almost took over during part 2. *I myself found myself getting horny while writing/reading part 2. Thought/Quote of the day: "Sorry I'm late; this elephant totally copped a 'tude with me" - Ron Stoppable, Kim Possible: A Sitch in Time Word of the day: unity
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