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Notes of KPJP Prologue to Chapter 3
Here are the notes for Kim Possible's Jurassic Park, part 1. It's going to be done, the notes just like with KPD. This is for Prologue to Chapter 3. *It was 80 pages handwritten in my journal and 47 pages approximately in MS Works. *It has 18962 words all together *It took about 3 to 4 days to write, and 13 hours and 5 hours all together to type. *It was the 21st fanfic I wrote in KP fanfic. *Although most of the chapters were longer than 1000 words, about 5 chapters were less though. *There were 16 chapters, including the Prologue and Epilogue. *All the chapters including the Prologue and the Epilogue had names. *Prologue: John Hammond's Proposition *Chapter 1: Welcome to Jurassic Park, Kim and Ron *Chapter 2: The Baby Dinosaur *Chapter 3: Ian Malcolm's Main Point *This fic is in my fanon timeline and will be shown in the timeline in a later set of notes *In the planning phrase I had thought about putting Ian Thespiniski in as Ian Malcolm, but to take out Ian Malcolm would be horrible. And plus why would Ian T hit on his wife's cousin? It would be as bad as RaA! *There was some debate to make Kim and Ron "the target audience" and have then be 12-16 ish but I nixed it because it wouldn't make sense because some of the things Lex does are just so stupid. I.E. shining the light at the Lex, Screaming, etc *Kim and Ron are supposed to represent Ellie Sattler and Alan Grant. Christy and Will were supposed to represent Lex and Tim. Only they are a family. *It's the 2nd fic that Ashley is not in at all. *This fic is like KPD, only twice as emotional for Kim, it showed her at her best, and really nice. *It had several references to KPD, and not many references to other fics *The first 2 scenes with Muldoon and Gennaro were meant to bring the movie into perspective *I was very true to the movie. Almost all of the events in the movie happened in the movie in this fic. *Juanito: "Because, the Stoppables lean too much towards saving the world, their children, and themselves as a couple,"-- it makes sense not to call them diggers of dinos *Kim, Ron, Narrative: "Well, that and something to do for fun," Kim said. "We already have something to do for fun," Ron said, smiling at her in a deviously lewd manner. He leaned in to kiss her neck and she moved back not letting him kiss her."-- Parareru said she was being coy. LOL. It seems that is all they do. *Let's just say for the sake of this fic and later ones related to KPJP that they have some sort of Ph.D. I dunno of what, but yea *Both Kim and Ron: "We, uh, don't really," "Know any,"-- Don't look at me like that. I know they know Brian Benlove, Ashley Possible Benlove's father who is a lawyer. But let's just say when APB was 16 ish, he was about 46 ish, making it possible that he might be older than FPB. But let's say that as of like HC or KF or AM he retired. *Ron and Narrative: "What kind of park is this?" Ron asked. He had a feeling of foreboding.-- oh yeah, Ron's got a feeling of foreboding. Uh oh. *I took out about 2 minutes of Dodgson and Nedry's scene in chapter 1 *Narrative: "She had on a pair of mid thigh length khaki shorts, a blue sleeveless top, and a pink button down shirt that was tied together at the bottom, opened and showing the blue top."-- she is wearing what Ellie wore in the movie *Narrative: "Ian Malcolm had square black glasses, curly hair, and was dressed in all black. Kim thought that he looked rather cute. Of course, she was married, but she was only looking at him. Not like he was her type anyway. At that moment she decided to steal a look at her husband."-- nothing wrong with just looking at Ian. But we know she loves Ron more than anything. We find out later on, just HOW much. *Narrative: "The first time the helicopter dropped fast, Ron grabbed Kim's arm and thigh with both his hands."-- Ron's copping a feel and he's afraid. Haha *I was very tempted to add an innuendo in about the leaf. *Kim's thought in Chapter 2 about Gennaro's autoerotica line is something that annoyed me for a few years. At least until I figured out what erotica was. Dirty stories. So I spoke through her to get my annoyance out of the way *Kim and Ron: "Why am I getting the strangest feeling like I'm watching the videotape of Christy's birth?" "Because, it's the miracle of birth?" "No. Not that I think it might be because you kept saying, "push!""-- Alluding to the birth of Christy. I have thought about doing a fic about that. But it would be even twice as hard than my sex stories. Seeing as from what I have heard from my elders, it is undescribable (giving birth) and that would be hard to do. *Kim's thought: "Ron's lucky. He's already witnessed a miracle or 2."-- this is alluding to KPD's miracle in the churchyard and quite possibly the birth of Christy and Will. *Kim's look: "Say something. I know you want to. I dare you. You do that all the time with me."-- it's saying that he lifts her skirts alot. Yeah. Kinda dirty. *This fic is filled with cute little arguments with Kim and Ron, sexual innuendos, at least until chapter 5. *Muldoon for me, for a long time had an evil bad guy vibe *I left out a few lines of Muldoon towards the end of chapter 2 *Ron, Kim, Christy, Will, and Ian Malcolm all share their thoughts at least once *Chapter 3 is a good chapter. *Ian Malcolm is a rather great dude at this point. *Ron's smart! *Notice his little gaffe about the kids? "Your children. Our. Our" *When Kim thinks that Ian is wrong about genetic power being the most awesome force the world has ever seen, rather that love is. That is my voice. I believe that. Yes, I am a romantic |
