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Notes of KP: MR
*6 pages handwritten, 2 pages in Word Perfect 10, times new roman, font 12 *946 words *37 minutes to type out. *Is the 53rd Kim Possible fanfic that I have created since September 26th, 2003 in the fandom. *3rd fic of October. *This is a difficult fic to explain. Is it continuity or not? It is the continuity, but not the KPD continuity. It is in the show continuity. It is in the continuity that has CKT all the way up to DOTL. Which is something of like this: *It based off events that happened in Emotion Sickness, the 2nd episode of Season 3, it's a companion ficcy to IITT. *I had debated about putting the story in 1st person narration, but I decided for it to be just a third person narration, no speaking, up until the second elipsis *Elipsis is these things: ... separating parts of the story. *Narration: 'Kim Possible stood in front of her mirror, looking at the moodulator that had been on the back of her neck, now in her hands. What a weird device-- to control people just based on emotions. But, then again, it was so typical of scientists; Kim was surprised that Drakken had not created it.'-- That last time is so typical of Kim. *Narration: "She could not believe what had happened to her while the moodulator was attached, she was in love with Ron? She suspected he was hurt by her little outbursts of love and hate in just a few short hours time."-- Yea, he probably was. I mean, he got his butt kicked by Kim, kissed by Kim, and so many other things in just a few short hours. *Narration: 'She rarely wore earrings; fights with Shego were often already brutal, she didn't need a torn ear or two to go with that as well.'-- Graphic, eh? I really like this line. *Narration: 'If her cousin Ashley ever found out, which was likely seeing as they lived in the same town, went to the same school, and were closely related, she would be more than disappointed as well.'-- Which is true, see IITT for more details. *The red bracelets being of APB stlye? Prolly. *Narration: 'She put the stilettos back into their shoe box. She laughed as she remembered what Ashley called them, "The Foxy Hottie Chick Shoes."'-- LOL. How cute. *Notice that both Kim and Ron wonder if the moodulator created feelings that are real? *This is my interpretation of ES. No one else's. *Narration: "He had not justified his answer, only saying that it had to do with their friendship."-- Which is true, it had to do with their friendship. *Narration: "She sighed. She put on her pajamas and laid on her bed. Wade had told her as soon as they got the Kimmunicator back what he saw. She had kissed Ron. On the lips. Talk about your blackmail. She touched her lips gently."-- This is why I named it what I named it. *Love the name? *Narration: 'It was an eventful evening. Oy. Actually it was an eventful day. In one day, he saw his entire friendship with Kim, all 12, 13 years of it tested. So, the moodulator had created all those feelings, huh?'-- They should be friends for about 13 years now. Ooh.. that's it. Hmmness. *Narration: 'He had to admit, it was nice seeing Kim show some emotion. Being that Kim was a teen superhero slash crimefighter, she detached herself from her emotions. Ron thought it to be unhealthy. I mean, sure Kim didn't like crying, but there was nothing wrong with a good cry on occasion, right?'-- I have to agree, it is very unhealthy to keep her emotions bottled up. It's like Ron said, "this is what happens when you keep the Mankey pain bottled up." It would have been cool if it had been a little... thing like that. *I don't doubt that Kim has a temper. *Narration: He had to laugh; when Kim wanted something she was going to get it.-- Very true. *Narration: 'The kiss, though. He was haunted by it. She should not have kissed him; moodulator or not. Granted, it was a wonderful kiss. Wow. He could still taste her strawberry lip gloss. But, she shouldn't have kissed him. He didn't want to feel that when he couldn't be with her.'-- Just enough information for you space cadets to understand my interp of how Ron feels. He's haunted by the kiss she should have never had gave him. So Episode 2 of Star Wars. *Narration: But, he knew it was better to do the former; his friendship with her meant so much to him. From T or Ting to saving the world to silly little arguments to... he yawned. He decided it was time to go to bed. And so, he went to sleep.-- the Trick or Treating reference was totally meant to be in there. After all this story premiered on Halloween. *Narration: 'She realized she would hate if this caused a riff in their friendship. He meant so much to her. And yet... she could never word it the way she wanted to. Her cousin, being the artist she was could, but Ashley was the last thing she needed.'-- The line, "He meant so much to her. And yet... she could never word it the way she wanted to." is somewhat inferences that I got from Could It Be. I mean, Kim has difficulty expressing herself! In more ways than one! And of course she downright REFUSES to tell Ashley... because APB would blab it to the world. Or Monique. Or Ian, then Monique. *Kim and Ron: "So, we cool?" "Like a crisp winter day,"-- There is line by Penny Proud and Dijonay that is similar to that except its "like the other side of the pillow." It's good not to worry. *Narration: 'She was glad she had resolved some unresolved issues for the time being. She pushed it to the back of her mind as they ordered some Bueno Nacho.'-- What did she push to the back of her mind? It shall be ambigious. Mwuhahaha! Mwuahahah! Mwahaha! Okay. enough of that.
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