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Notes of SaS
*8 pages handwritten, 5 pages typed in Word Perfect 10, Times New Roman, font 12 *1568 words *45 minutes to type out. *Is the 58th Kim Possible fanfic that I have created since September 26th, 2003 in the fandom. *Is an "alternate version" to chapter 7 of KPAL's kiss. You can either go with the kiss being the true continuity of KPAL... or this. *It took a few hours to write out last night. *My first true femslash with emotional implications. KaA does not count. *Also the first one in which is greatly graphic. *It was so hard to right because I was very much personally aroused. *Did you take a cold shower afterwards? I'm surprised I didn't. *Wrote it because it screamed for me to write it. I had to. *It made me look at Kim and Shego fights in a whole new way... *Narration: 'Kim gulped. She just said she would do anything for Ron and that she would be happy to prove it. She could not go against her word; what kind of friend would she be? If it got Ron out of whatever danger he was in, then so be it.'-- I love how that is worded. The semicoloned sentence is balanced. I thought that was so awesome. *Kim and Shego: "Your hotel room?" "Yeah, you expect me to put up with Drakken and Hamsterviel do you?"-- I don't. She prolly rented it for the heck of it. *Narration: 'They reached the Birds of Paradise Hotel. They walked around to the other side where the rooms were. Shego pulled out a key from her leg pouch and used it to open a door for room number 468.' -- The BoP Hotel is the only element of L&S in the fic. The number means something. On the telephone keypad it call spell out "HOT." Which is a foreshadowing of things to come. *Shego and Narrative: "Women are beautiful creatures, Kim; their hair, their eyes, their breasts," Shego got closer to Kim and whispered gently, "their pussies. You could say, I love women."-- Isn't that a really nice line? *Narration: 'She put her hands on the end of her tank top and pulled it off. The bikini top Kim wore underneath showed two nipples hardening under the fabric.'-- Kim is already hot for Shego... hehe. *Narration: 'Kim could feel the liquid down there as she looked at Shego. She wanted Shego to take off that jumpsuit of her's. She could barely imagine what was underneath it all.'-- Hehe. The little virgin is fascinating... *Narration: 'Shego came towards her and kissed it. It was not just a kiss. Shego kissed her with such passion that Kim was blown away.'-- I believe that. *Narration: 'Kim looked at her own, they were nice, but nowhere near Shego's. Kim's were probably still maturing, but Shego's... they were another story. Kim felt Shego's gloved hands at her pants zippers, they were removing her pants. Kim took her own hands and touched Shego's face and looked into Shego's eyes... eyes that were like her's, eyes that were deep and penetrating and kissed her. It was not a short kiss, but a long one. Deep and passionate, hot and heavy.'-- Kim's compared to Shego... well just watch the show. So much fun! *Nice title eh? I was thinking about the title being Sex With Shego, but I nixed it. *Kim's thoughts: 'I can't believe I want Shego this bad,'-- That screams Kim's character so well. *Kim and Shego: "Come on, Shego, give it to me," "This doesn't sound like the Kimmie I know, and you're a virgin..." "Virgins can fantasize! I know I have. About--"-- Virgins do fantasize, no doubt about that. Shego calls Kimmie quite a bit in the fic... hehe. *Kim fantasizing about Shego... ooh. There goes alot of secrets revealed. *I have personally believed there is some part of Kim that is in love with Shego. *Kim: "Please and thank you..."-- How appropriate. Now whenever I hear her say that I'll not think of it the same way again. *Narration: 'Whatever Shego was doing to Kim was making Kim feel so good. Kim grabbed the sheets. Kim couldn't even think of the person for whom she was doing this for; Ron. The only thoughts Kim held was Shego and the wonderful passion she was feeling.'-- Hehe, Kim doesn't know what Shego is doing. Man, she is a virgin. Hehe. *Shego says the word virgin the same way the infamous Aphrodite did in KPAX. Hehe. *Shego and Kim: "You're about to have an orgasm soon aren't you?" "What's an orgasm?" "Man, you are a virgin! You're about to find out,"-- Talk about something to boast about! Kim getting sex lessons/education from Shego! LOL. And doesn't it sound like Shego? "Man, you are a virgin!" *Narration: 'The most wonderful feeling Kim ever felt. It was euphoric. She screamed out two words in passion; "Oh, Shego!"'-- Oooh... *Narration: 'Kim could taste her own fluids on Shego's lips. Shego was right; she did taste good.'-- According to Ron in some of my other fics, for example KF, etc, she tastes like Strawberries. *Kim: "Do you remember when I sneezed on you and you were on top of me? I wanted you them. Both of us were dripping wet and I could barely take it."-- Sick Day reference! I will never look at that scene the same way again. It's so bloody hot. *Kim's thoughts: 'It was better than I thought it would be,'-- It sure sounded like that. *Shego: "Man, Kimmie, what a corrupted little teen hero you are! I think we found your vice."-- Hehe. And it's all Shego's fault. Shego did it! *Kim wants to know how she was. LOL. It certainly sounds like her. *Shego: "That's why I stopped dating men, Kimmie," Shego said. "They always wanna know how great they were... but you, princess were extraordinary..."-- Haha. I wonder if Drakken was among those... or even SSJ. Oh god the HORROR! I'll give myself nightmares now! *It's a shame KP is a Disney G Rated show. Why can't we just have some Kim and Shego romance? Why!? |
