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Notes of TCAJ
*6 pages handwritten, approximately 3 pages typed in Word Perfect 10, Times New Roman, font 12 *933 words *23 minutes to type out *Is the 163th Kim Possible fanfic that I have created since September 26th, 2003 in the fandom that I have made. *The 95th fic this year. *3rd fic in the 7th notebook *The 33th fic since the beginning of my 3rd year of writing these fics (Sept 1st). *The 8th fic this month. *The final page of this fic was the 1900th HW Page since I started writing. *Is the 2nd fic to premiere/be finished the same date as a fic two years later. AHFT is the fic two years prior that premiered on this date. *AHFT, incidentally was also a first time sex story for Kim, though one of my more traditional ones. *The first four pages, from the beginning of the fic, till this line: "Utterly exhausted, John dropped his head on her chest and she let out a great sigh." was written as I watched The Breakfast Club, everything after that was written during the first about 10-15 minutes of KP: So The Drama. *This fic is an Alternate Universe/Alternate Version of The Saturday Club which is based off the scenes in which Claire goes into the closet John was locked in. *This is the 5th first time sex story Kim has been in, and the first time with somebody other than Ron. *John is the 5th person Kim has fucked, after Ron, Shego, APB, and Ian Malcolm in assorted fics and in the order of most. *Kim: "No, I just felt like coming in here. Giving you some company,"-- She obviously came in for a reason, lol. Crazy. *John: "You like bad boys, huh, Kim?"-- Ron asked Kim the same exact thing in Bad Boy, about 4 minutes into the episode. I love that. Interesting, eh? *Kim: "There's something forbidden about them. I've always found them kind of hot. That whole image, you know?-- LOL. Nice, Kimmy. *Narr: John surprised Kim by grabbing her and kissing her. His kiss was rough, as he had unsmooth lips, but Kim liked the kiss. It was a forbidden kiss, seeing that she was a goody good girl and he was a bad boy criminal, and Kim liked it.-- Nice. LOL. Fun. *Narr: John's hands went underneath the shirt Kim was wearing and put his hands over her perky and small breasts.-- How cute! I think Blanche of The Girls, usually describes her breasts as "perky and small busoms," consistently through the entire show. *Kim: "36A."-- I've always been random about her cup size through my fics. But, this one is for personal choice. I think A Cup is cute because they're so small and you can hold them in your hands-- something I haven't been able to do with my own in prolly 5, 6 years. *Kim: "This is dangerous, somebody could come in, like Mr. Barkin."-- LOL. Kim is worried about being caught by Barkin in a compromising position. *John: "That's what makes it better, the risk of getting caught. Being bad feels pretty good, huh, Kim?"-- I think that Kim says the first sentence in QSI, from last summer to Ron! The second sentence is John's straight from TBC. *John: "Cherry, I can make you feel real good. None of those nice guys you know can make you feel great. They're too busy with making it more like making love and not hot fucking,"-- LOL. Rhett Butler tells Scarlett O'Hara very similar. "You need more scoundrels in your life." "Nice guys" to me translates to "Ron Stoppable." LOL. *Narr: It wasn't the way Kim had imagined her first time to be: in a school closet with the school bad boy. She had always figured her first time would be in her own bed with a nice guy.-- LOL. Nice. LOL. I can understand that thought, as I know a girl (who I shall not name to protect her identity, but I will call her "S") at CHS who lost her virginity in the Cantu Gym in the girls' restroom stall. She and her boyfriend were caught and ended up going for a while to the Student Learning and Guidance Center. They later broke up. And once again, "nice guy" translates to "Ron Stoppable." *Kim: "But, no fate but what we make,"-- Hah, quoting Terminator. But, it is so true. |
