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Notes of TNA.
*4 pages handwritten, approximately 2 pages typed in Word Perfect 10, Times New Roman, font 12 *626 words *16 minutes to type out *Is the 181th Kim Possible fanfic that I have created since September 26th, 2003 in the fandom that I have made. *The 17th fic of 2006. *21th fic in the 7th notebook *The 51th fic since the beginning of my 3rd year of writing these fics (Sept 1st). *I wrote it in an hour and a half ish. *While Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets was on the D.C. and I listened to several cds, starting with "Never Gone"-- the song, "Livin' La Vida Loca,"-- Shrek 2 style, "Beautiful", "Fighter," and a few of Christina Aguilera "Stripped" songs, "Say The Word" and "Could It Be" from CCR's album, half of the Black and Blue cd specifically "Shape of My Heart," "Shining Star," "I Promise You (With Everything I Am)," "The Answer to My Life," and finishing up with "Can You Feel The Love Tonight" -- TLKOB version. *Takes place in between the end of Kim Possible's Jurassic Park, specifically in the epilogue and the beginning scene of The Day Alone. Stories written in April 2004 and May 2004, respectively. *Being the first time since KPJP's Epilogue nearly 2 years ago, I actually cried while I wrote parts of this. *How does it go on my typical erotica scale? I mean, it's erotica without being completely hot and heavy. It's atypical to what I usually write. But, something like this is deserving of that. *If you wondering "WHAT DID YOU EAT LAST NIGHT?!" I can tell you. Lean Cruisine, Sweet and Sour Chicken with white rice and Diet Black Cherry Vanilla Coke. But, I don't think it was the food I ate that wrote this, I think it was the music. Specifically the KP music, the BSB music, and CYFTLT. *Narr: The trip to Jurassic Park left the thirty six year old Kim Possible Stoppable deeply vulnerable. The once teen hero, turned secret agent who had two children and was married to her Ron Stoppable, her best friend of over thirty years had feared the night before that she had lost her entire family.-- Setting up what had happened in KPJP, and decided to tell who she was. You know me. *Kim: "Make love to me as you've never made love to me before." -- I like that. Beautiful, man. *Narr: Ron's hands caressed her softly, feeling her soft skin and the mark Jurassic Park had left on her. Cuts, scrapes, an injured ankle, a greater love for her husband, and vulnerability. He wanted to make up Jurassic Park to her, make her forget about it. He pulled her closer to him and then kissed her with everything he had.-- I never did actually address any of the injuries that she herself sustained in the park in KPJP. I mean, she did an ankle injury, and she was obviously totally freaked. *Narr: Prior to the night before, they had spent seventeen years of nights together with each other in some way. The last time they hadn't been together in the same bed was when they were nineteen. They both wanted to make that up, having felt like they nearly lost each other in that horrid park. That very night, they promised each other that they would die old together, warm in their bed, so that they could never be apart from each other's presence.-- I actually had to get out the Dogma screenplay to spell presence right. LOL. But I did get it. The information in this passage comes from stuff said in Chapter 10 of KPJP. *Narr: The pleasure that each one was feeling was more than just having sex, it was two people who loved each other their whole lives, making each other feel absolutely wonderful. The passion was there, the desire was there, the love was there, the pleasure was there, the lifelong friendship was there...-- Right in this song, I shed a few tears. Now, not wanting to lose myself in my tears, I closed my eyes and stopped any more. This passage is very beautiful. *Narr: Kim's hands slowly went down Ron's back as Ron pleasured her at each part of her body, from her erogenous zones right down to her lips. Her beautiful green eyes were closed as she let out soft moans. Ron's eyes were half closed as their fifteen year marriage became stronger than it ever was.-- That's even more nice. The final line in this passage, brought more tears, but I held them in, not wanting to be an emotional mess by the time I got to bed. *Narr: Ron let out a noise of pleasure that sounded like a mix between a "booyah," a gasp, and a moan. Kim was almost through, her pleasure was almost at the point. It was near to happen, as it usually happened mere moments after her husband. Then she let out a soft yell of pleasure that told Ron they would love each other forever, no matter what happened between them. Kim's yell of pleasure was the most beautiful sound on Earth. It was the promise that they would die old together, late in their lives, warm in the bed. Never to be without each other for the rest of their lives, no matter what happened.-- Third time I cried, letting the tears actually fall down my cheeks. But not making a sound. See, I guess that's why "I Promise You (With Everything I Am)" is a good song to listen to. This song is what this story is basically about. Listen to it, read this, yeah. ;) *Narr: As the two went to sleep that night, they held onto each other, so that they wouldn't leave each other's side. Not letting go of each other as if afraid to lose the other; forever to love each other.-- I really love this. I mean, it's touching, it's technically an erotica story, but without going into graphic detail. ;) |
