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Notes of TAC
*4 pages handwritten, approximately 2 pages typed in Word Perfect 10, Times New Roman, font 12 *585 words *18 minutes to type out *Is the 188th Kim Possible fanfic that I have created since September 26th, 2003 in the fandom that I have made. *The 24th fic of 2006. *28th fic in the 7th notebook *The 58th fic since the beginning of my 3rd year of writing these fics (Sept 1st). *Narr: She was lying down on her stomach on the couch, her arms supporting her head. He was sitting in the chair adjacent to the couch. They were watching a bunch of science fiction-y horror films.-- Think of the way that they are sitting is similar to the way they watched American Starmaker in the episode Rappin' Drakken. I refer to Alien films as "sci fi-y horror" because that's what they kinda are. *Narr: She had an incredibly intense serious look on her face. He cringed. It was going to be a serious hypothetical question.-- The way that last line is narrated reminds me of a certain line in the beginning of KR, prolly where I got it from. *Kim: "In Aliens, Ripley tells Hicks that 'I'm not going to end up like those others. You'll do it, won't you?' and then he says, 'Let's just hope it doesn't come to that.' Now, she was referring to if she got one inside her and saying to kill her before the chestbusting infant Alien killed her. Now, here's the hypothetical question. It's so because the chances of an Alien like event happening in this world are as likely as the events of Star Wars being true."-- That exchange between Ripley and Hicks is one of my favorites. She refers to Star Wars instead of my handwritten choice "Da Vinci Code" but then I realized, that could prolly really happen. LOL. *Ron: "Just ask your damn question!"-- I like Dorothy of the Golden Girls said something like that. "Now ask your damn question." *Ron: "Is this a question of my loyalty to you? Because you know I'll be loyal to you to the end, right?"-- He thinks it's his loyalty to her that's being question. LOL. *I like how I protray Kim. She's as intense and serious as some of my best KPDU fics. (This is a "one-shot" stand alone fic) *Ron: "If it meant killing one of those fuckers, pardon me, then yes. I mean, I would hate to have to do it, but, if you wanted me to do it, then yes,"-- LOL. "Pardon me" right after he cussing. That's usually my way of cussing in front of people. I cuss and then I say "pardon me" *Kim: "Okay. I would rather die quickly or in battle then die the way Kane, everyone but Newt on LV-426, Spike, and even Ripley herself died," -- In battle, of course, is the way a girl like KP would want to die. Hell, even I'd like to die in battle. Each of her character refs refer to the first three films. Alien (Kane), Aliens (everyone but Newt), Alien 3 (Spike and Ripley). *Narr and Kim: Kim closed her eyes, shuddered about a second later, apparently imagining having to do it, and then moved around on the couch so that she was lying on her back, her arms behind her head. "It would be so heartbreaking to have to do it. I mean, you're my best friend, everything that's good in me I owe to you. But, you'd be dead anyway, so I would,"-- I like the idea of her moving around so she's looking up instead of at him. And the line "everything that's good in me I owe to you" is something from a song. A lyric from BSB's Never Gone. *Kim: I can understand how Obi-Wan Kenobi felt about Yoda going after Sidious and he having to go after Anakin."-- Yeah, it killed him. *Ron and Kim: "Hey, if you could be any character from the four Alien movies. Who'd you be?" "What's the point of this question?" "I answered your question; you answer mine."-- I like this exchange, it came to me as I was typing. Then I'd realized that KP wouldn't compare herself to any character unless she had to. And she had to. Ron answered her question, she she answered his. LOL. *The characters they chose are obviously. Ripley seems to be one of the inspirations for KP, I like Vasquez, Hicks was cool, Drake was Vasq's best friend, and Hudson was a big baby. |
