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Notes of The Suit With Love
*6 pages handwritten, approximately 3 pages typed in Word Perfect 10, Times New Roman, font 12 *1110 words *31 minutes to type out *Is the 258th Kim Possible fanfic that I have created since September 26th, 2003. *The 8th fic of 2007. *17th fic in the 9th notebook I've used since the beginning. *The 28th fic since the beginning of my 4th year of writing these fics (Sept 1st). *28th fic this school year. *4th fic of this month. *the 84th fic based off a KP episode. *Ill-Suited *Is the 51th fic to premiere/be finished the same date as a fic one year later. ATS is the fic one year ago that premiered/finished today. *Weird Title, but I wanted part of the episode title in the fic title. I felt the need. *Took something like a total of 6 hours to write. I did it off and on throughout the day. The majority of it being written after 6 pm. *I typed out the fic whilst listening to Beautiful Soul, most of the Call Me Beep Me versions, Can You Feel The Love Tonight, Kim's save the world theme, Let's Make Love, and Say The Word. *This is the 7th fanfic I've done with Kim and Ron's first sexual experience. There was A Hero's First Time (Dec 2003), Kim's Love Affair (Dec 2004), Prom Night Loving (April 2005), Kim Possible's Golden Girls (Dec 2005), Passionate Sparring (March 2006), After the Game (May 2006), and then this one. Each of them going with a different route. *This is what I believe is probably what happened after the events of that episode, off screen. No porn on KP unfortunately. :) *Narrator and Kim: After their first fight because of Professor Dementor's controlling Kim Possible's super suit when it was worn by Ron Stoppable, Kim and Ron were sitting in Kim's room. "That was an interesting night," Kim said. "That was an interesting fight. You versus me."-- Setting up what happened in Ill-Suited and stuff. This kinda mirrors Passionate Sparring in a way. :D *Ron and Kim: "I didn't hurt you when I threw you into the soda machine, did I?" "Oh, I'm fine. It's no big,"-- That was a frightening moment there, but it was great. I love it. *Narr: Ron nodded. He looked in Kim's green eyes and softly caressed her cheek, and then kissed her on the lips. It was a soft moment, and Kim smiled at it. She took Ron's hands in hers and then kissed him passionately. Kim put Ron's hands around her tiny waist, and Kim kissed him again. When his hands moved up her body and touched her breasts, Kim let out a loud moan in his ears.-- I love that. It's so sweet. *Ron: "Whoa, that moan should not have turned me on as much as it did,"-- Haha. Ron's turned on by moans in his ears? That's so sexy... *Narrator: Kim chuckled and then sighed. If there was ever a more perfect night for their first time, this was it. Kim kissed Ron again, and then sat on Ron's lap, facing him.-- That was like one of the first lines I came up with first in my head. The second line. I love it so much. *Narr: There was a certain electricity between the two of them that gave a feeling of this was the night.-- Yeah, I like that. I did. *Kim, Narr, and Ron: "This could be the night. This could be our first time... you know," Kim said. "Are we ready for this?" "To have sex, make love, whatever its called?" Ron asked. "I mean, it's bound to happen eventually. How do you feel about it?"-- I like that little exchange. Kim asks if they're ready for it and Ron wants to know about her feelings on sex. *Kim: "Well, I always told myself that I would only do it when I felt it to be right and I was in love with the person I wanted to be with it in such as way. Since I'm in love with you, and I love you, and it feels so right, this could be the night. Only if you are okay with it, Ron,"-- Her feelings totally mirror my own. I like the way she says it. Ron: "Well, my lady is calling me to please her, how can I say no?"-- This reminds me and probably is a nod to Kimron Posstoppable's "Are You Still Up?" smuff fic. :D Go read it at FF.net, it's one of my faves. I assure you, you'll want to masturbate. *Kim: "Ron, listen, I want it to be more about the emotion of the act, then about the act or the pleasure that comes with it. I don't want us to just have sex to get a newfound pleasure. I want there to be something that we do to get closer emotionally. The pleasure and physical thing being a bonus,"-- Aww... that's so sentimental. That makes me feel all emotional. I mean, yeah, it feels well. As that's how sex should be. *Narr, Ron, Kim: They both sighed. "I'm scared, Kim," Ron said. "Yeah, I'm scared, too," Kim said. "It's a big step." "You're scared, too?" "Hey, at least you're in good company," Kim said. She looked thoughtful and then added, "How about we hold each other's hand through the whole thing and not let go until orgasm happens-- as that's when you let go. To comfort each other."-- I love that she admits she's scared too. For some reason that really pulled at my heartstrings when I wrote that. It's so precious. The whole hand holding thing until the final release of orgasm references to The Terminator. In that sex scene, you see two hands holding on tightly and then they... let go. It's poetic in a way and for some reason thinking about is getting to me. *I like how they remove their undies at the same time. It's perfection. *Kim and Ron: "Be gentle, it hurts a bit the first time." "Squeeze my hand if it hurts," "Sounds like a good deal,"-- I like that. That's so sweet. *Kim: "I guess kung fu and cheerleading has finally paid off. That didn't hurt too much,"-- I like that. That's always been my theory. Her kung fu and cheerleading stunts have made her... ahem nether regions more... flexible to tear. *Narr: Kim kissed Ron and then they gave it all to each other. They held the hands they said they would hold, not letting go. Even though the two of them were somewhat afraid, they were comforted by each other. Kim moaned softly; she squeezed Ron's hand. Ron moaned softly and squeezed her hand back. They looked into each other's eyes as they emotionally and physically were with each other. It was wonderful as waves of pleasure hit them, the bonus of the pack, they never felt something like this before.-- I love this. It's so beautiful. Heaven on earth. *Kim, Ron, Narr: "Oh, wow," Kim said. "That was..." "Amazing," Ron replied, finishing her sentence. "I was going to say 'beautiful' or 'perfect' but that works too,"-- The beautiful thing is a reference to when Kim and Ron first see her car for the first time in "Car Alarm." Ron says, "It's..." and Kim finishes for him, "Beautiful." And I gotta agree with that. That sex with them was amazing, beautiful, and perfect. Yay for Kim and Ron! |
